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MLP The Damage Fee by LoCeri MLP The Damage Fee by LoCeri
Check out the alternate ending here [link]

For the record, I have nothing against Rainbow Dash, I just felt she fit the part in this comic.

Also, heres a little true story that influenced this comic:
When I was a lot younger in school, we were reading a story from of a textbook. I turned a page too hard and tore it. So I quickly switched it for another without being noticed.

The next day when we continued reading someone else had opened the book with the torn page and told the teacher. The teacher then proceeded to scream at the class asking "WHO DID THIS!!!" Just the volume of her voice made it seem as if she was going to slam someones head against the table just as what happened in the comic.

I was scared as hell, so hell I wasnt gonna admit what I did. :D


edit: Wings!

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:iconbronyguylol:
bronyguylol Featured By Owner 6 hours ago
r3kt
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:iconw0nderbolts:
W0nderbolts Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2016
this lesson is just proving that telling the truth isnt the best answer because if that ***** is going to act like that, might as well hide the book
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:iconfawnpegasus:
FawnPegasus Featured By Owner 12 hours ago  New Deviant Hobbyist Interface Designer
Rainbow u loyalty not honesty
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:iconw0nderbolts:
W0nderbolts Featured By Owner 12 hours ago
im pretty sure everyone can tell the truth
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FawnPegasus Featured By Owner 10 hours ago  New Deviant Hobbyist Interface Designer
Yea but I'm pretty sure rainbow would have tried to keep twilights book secret
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:iconw0nderbolts:
W0nderbolts Featured By Owner 2 hours ago
for an episode probably but for this comic, twilight is just being a dick here
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:iconfawnpegasus:
FawnPegasus Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2016  New Deviant Hobbyist Interface Designer
Does anyone realizes that twilight is carrying the book with her hooves not her magic
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lauleolu41 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2016  New Deviant
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DDangerDashie Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2016
Wander Emote: Giggle 
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AlphaPony05 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Twilight be harsh
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:iconalphapony05:
AlphaPony05 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
God damn.
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GoofyRat Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2016
thank you for your mlp art and that one is one doofy expression on poor rainbow dash face love it good job
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Aral654 Featured By Owner May 23, 2016
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room
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:iconlilytheneko09:
LilyTheNeko09 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2016
*facepalm*
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:iconsupercrystalhedgie01:
SuperCrystalHedgie01 Featured By Owner May 4, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
S
Dashie should have known that was coming
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:iconzigzagcave:
zigzagcave Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room
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:iconreddoctor2531:
RedDoctor2531 Featured By Owner May 15, 2016  Student Artist
This is a fake don't read it
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:iconkartoffelkamm:
Kartoffelkamm Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
just as i reached the part where Twilight smashes Dahs´s head into the book, the song Nuclear Attack i was listening to reached the part
"Extermination
Strike Back"
:)
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:iconoverpowereddinosaur:
OverPoweredDinosaur Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Twilight (Cheerleader) Plz" WE WERE 
MEAN TO BE TOGETHER BWAHAHAHAHAAHAHAAAAA!!!!"
;-;
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:iconblackwidow1001:
BlackWidow1001 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2016   Digital Artist
what great friendsMLP Emote Twilight Sparkle Angry Mad Upset MLP Emote Twilight Sparkle Crazy Insane Loony 
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:iconphilichez:
PhiliChez Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
For some reason it just makes me happy when Twilight is violent.
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:iconblackwidow1001:
BlackWidow1001 Featured By Owner Edited Mar 4, 2016   Digital Artist
I know right
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:iconliamsnider:
liamsnider Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2016
Bad that I can actually see her reacting like that..
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:iconseithsnipper:
seithsnipper Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2016
i had a friend that did the same thing.
To me. i was like Dashie
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TheRageeGirl Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2016  Student Artist
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room
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:iconskrillexdabest:
Skrillexdabest Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok WARNING!! YOU ARE STUPID ENOUGH TO LISTEN TO THAT CRAP!
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:iconfluffymarshmallow:
FluffyMarshmallow Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry... I don't mean to be rude, but maybe they were just confused and didn't know if they should believe it or not... so maybe you shouldn't have to be mean...
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:icondragonponynyanpower:
DragonPONYnyanPOWER Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
HA!  Deja vu with my sister...
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:iconcosmicnekochan:
CosmicNekoChan Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2016
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room
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:icondragonponynyanpower:
DragonPONYnyanPOWER Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
That's dumb.
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CosmicNekoChan Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will poop, even if you only looked at the word poop!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a bathroom, because she pooped her mom and her dad. She so bad diarrhea she went to poop all the janitors in the bathroom so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to poop her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the toilet they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours because she had major constipation until she died of major poop-loss. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your bathroom and poops slowly, by opening the bathroom door and watching you turn up your nose in disgust. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will poop in someone else's bathroom who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl pooping and farting in your bathroom
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SunBoom122 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will poop, even if you only looked at the word poop!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a bathroom, because she pooped her mom and her dad. She so bad diarrhea she went to poop all the janitors in the bathroom so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to poop her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the toilet they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours because she had major constipation until she died of major poop-loss. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your bathroom and poops slowly, by opening the bathroom door and watching you turn up your nose in disgust. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will poop in someone else's bathroom who doesn't. This is fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to howmany comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little girl pooping and farting in your bathroom, who will disappear
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LilyTheNeko09 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2016
That version is much better
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:iconmlprj:
mlprj Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooook didn't see that one coming Coco Pommel is Shoked! (Not Animated) 
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MeteoricKnave7 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2015  Student General Artist
XD
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mousedapple3300 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2015
I saw a sfm version of dis on utube
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:iconphilichez:
PhiliChez Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
waat? must search
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:iconudeadmonkey9:
Udeadmonkey9 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2015
Evil Vegeta-icon RENAGADE FOR LIFE

(if you didnt know its a dbz abridged refrance)
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:iconponygirl21:
ponygirl21 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2015
OHHHHH SNAP
dont mess with twilight Oshawott swag 
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:iconmlpiloveme123:
mlpiloveme123 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2015  Student General Artist
Hahahahaha I do not know if I am crying or laughing!!!!     LOL!!!!!
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RainbowDashFan0122 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
WOW THATS AWKWARD AND IM COMMENTING WITHOUT LOOKING AT THE KEYBOARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! NOW IM JUST LIKE MY MOM WHEN SHE TYPES, SHE NEVER LOOKS AT THE BOARD CUZ SHE MEMORIZED THE KEYS!
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seal77972 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2015  Student Artist
twis reaction to dancing twi
Twilight Sparkle head icon 
*Free Icon/Emote* Twilight Hairball Pusheen : Ok so there's my face Chibi Twilight Sparkle Icon 
Twilight Sparkle top icon 
*Free Icon/Emote* Twilight Hairball Pusheen : Um... What the equestria?Twilight Sparkle (what!) plz 
Twilight Sparkle bottom icon 
*Free Icon/Emote* Twilight Hairball Pusheen :EWW MLP Emote Twilight Sparkle Cry Sad twilight sparkle (blink eye) plz Twilight Sparkle nose bleed icon Twilight Sparkle Jaw Drop Twilight Sparkle (uh) plz 
But I didn't listen (Pinkie Pie) PLZ : MY Twilight Sparkle Plot DONT(i dont know what Andaconda means)
Princess Sparkle Kidnapped 
twitwi: Twilight Sparkle (i do not know) plz 
A THING U MISSED IN MLP:
Spike pushing his hands up Twi's butt Spike helps Twilight Sparkle 














FAN TWISTwilightDash kiss Twilight Sparkle Spike keeps helping Twilight Alicorn KissesCould've Happened TwilightDancer icon  dude you deviants are gross




































time to cheer u              Loser Sparkle Crazy Twi icon Twilight Sparkle Plot Twilight Sparkle what did i just witness? Crazy Twilight SparkleTwilight Shocked EmoteTwilight Sparkle (I'M PANCAKE) plz Soarin Dance icon AskBrutaloo Twerking Mollestia Plot Rarity annoyed by Sweetie Belle Brutaloo Twerking 
Muffin Plot Rainobw Dash Plot Pinkie Pie plot Trixie Plot Bon Bon Plot Lyra Heartstring Plot Fluttershy Plot Applejack Plot Rarity Plot
















did i make you GIF My Little Pony - Laugh
                                                                                                        
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TruUnicorn Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2016
Why? I din't even know what happend!
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:iconmlprj:
mlprj Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
no...... just confused
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:iconyanney:
yanney Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
nobody damage twilight's books
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:iconmikasamlp531:
mikasamlp531 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
CHILL TWILIGHT
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:iconfire-flower-taco-dog:
can i read this?
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dusknoir64 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2015
RD-Nope, now I just see a bunch of pretty stars...
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SayEeda19 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015  Student Digital Artist
O-o

Twi: Thats what you get. Never borrow my books again Anger - Inside Out 

RD: A-aye aye captain...
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ponymiku Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Baaah hahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahahahahaha
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